Post by Dres on Mar 19, 2023 15:25:02 GMT -6
Been a busy man, I am going to change the "early review" perk into the "If you add a response/review of the show Imma review yo stuff". I will still be reviewing weeklies but time constraints make it hard to go into detail weekly, Thanks beautiful people. I will also review every match weekly from now on aswell.
I wrote Trent and Cranns match: I hope I gave both guys a lot to play with, Steiner gets more reason to want to kill my boy Buzzard, The thread was great both guys are amazing with their characters, I liked Trents TT's, I tried to make the match evenly matched with Steiner getting the chance to look like a beast while Will looked resilient in a different kind of reason not like a Spike Dudley, I added the third suplex spot where Will lands on his feet to show that the man takes a beating and keeps on tickin'. I had alot of fun with commentary on this match.
Danny The G.O.A.T: Dude writes matches like he doesn't do this every week, every match felt unique that Danny wrote, Sucks to see three matches this week though, I would of done an extra but by the time I was going to ask he had already finished two and I wish I could of helped. This week I am asking to take two matches so this doesn't happen two weeks in a row. The main event match was cut short by storyline but something I realised is that the Commentary changed which made it easy to identify who wrote the end part. Danny I wish you would ask more if you need some extra help because brother I am always down to write more.
Faucher : Ciampa being triple protected in that finish, Buzzard comes off exactly how I imagine this iteration of Buzzard would "wrestle", I read Fauche's of writing and it's engaging from start to finish as always.
Matches are out of the way (People should offer to write a match once in awhile, it's cool and fun, Thanks Danny this week for carrying a heavy workload)
Reply to TrentSev: It's okay sucks to see no promo but you won a match so your presence was still felt on the show. I appreciate the feedback on your match, I felt I went too hard on commentary so I tried to compensate for it with action but than went overboard on that aswell, Nearly 4000 words, I even got a strongly worded talkin' to from Danny for writing such a long match, Glad you enjoyed it.
No Batista Promo: This week the feud between spike and Batista was carried forwards by Spike promos and by the match which Batista and Jarrett won, Everything Batista has done or hasn't makes perfect sense for the character and I feel no promo this week adds to it.
C.U.N.T: I was happy to see the return of Grado why did his captors release him. As I said above the ending was obviously writing in the styling of Leeds, The feud between these two is so obviously well thought out, I enjoyed the ending to the tag match.
Lee Arrives Late: I laughed out loud when Lee said ”Hey, what’s a kidnappin’ ‘cept for a disappearance wit’ extra steps?”, Such a comedic line and well placed, I love the manipulative politician aspect of Lee, With so many false promises, I feel I know whats happening but I'll let others figure that out. I love this promo it adds a lot to the bigger picture, Thanks Leedles and Sam for making such an interesting story.
No Hogan: I would suggest writing a promo for next show you've got a date at Mania I want to hear the Hulksters thoughts on the punks he is facing. Does he have beef with the good son of a jack, Jeff Jarrett for stealing the victory at Beach Break, Hogan wants the gold obviously but you could also reach out to any of the guys in the feud as they are all really helpful and love working collaboratively.
Cody Finna be interrupted: The color change was unexpected, Than I read that Willy wrote this? I enjoyed the promo and it's good to see these two doing a lot for their feud, I am glad this story is working out this way.
Now what I waited all week for, Yeah: DID NOT DISAPPOINT, YEAH:
The opening for the date was short but it set the scene well, The line about a cyanide pill was great. Also I love the translation it really feels impactful to the story, it made me cry a tear of happiness.
Twitter is evil: The two order, Poor Knight having one of the most frustrating dates, Bayley is on a date with Twitter at this point...
Convienent Timing: Why not a dark alley? I think thats a perfect place to take a date... Firstly "Itch" not knowing who LA Knight is was golden, A 12 pack for one Knight you know that LA has that stamina but the line that got me here was was the insinuation of Knight being in a relationship with himself, Knight and Austin is a dream promo I would love to hear, The humour in this first part was on point, I loved Austin showing up on 3/16 much like those before me.
Time For Dessert: Short but Bayley not letting Knight get a word in, That's unheard of, I mean I agree with Bayley there is enough space for all. Not much from Knight here but it was great way to show the date moving along...
She's a lady: I mean I love the line where Bayley reveals Kyle was committing Grand Theft Auto to come beat Knight's ass, I love the ending for the date it makes me want to see what these two do next, It's a 10/10 promo tonight really enjoyed it.
Ah but there WAS a Batista promo, good sir! Lol
